knocz
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Posted : Nov 24, 2012 00:58
(hope I don't come on too harsh, but)
-it sounds like you have a LP filter on the whole tune
-kick sounds like plastic
-bass is simple, without any envelopes or fine tweaking
-melodies are very weak
-effects are plain and without context
-the overall structure is missing
-work more on the perc
-sounds like you don't know what you are doing..
Overall personal opinion: the track isn't worth 2 cents.
stop posting same stuff in all kinds of sections here..
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B-recluse
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Posted : Nov 25, 2012 14:41
ok your bass sounds empty i won't be that hard on you ! make it a bit brighter !? ( filtering ) i must say i miss the good old days and the vibe ! these days ego's are dominating and allot what i hear sounds the same to me !! So original sounds are always welcome to my ears !ok concentrate and fix your basis ( kick and bass) and dig deeper into your sounds !! then you can roll !! succes with the production ! If you need tips ? let me know , thats really giving support ! Namaste
e-scape
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Posted : Nov 26, 2012 00:15
Quote:
On 2012-11-24 00:58, knocz wrote:
(hope I don't come on too harsh, but)
-it sounds like you have a LP filter on the whole tune
-kick sounds like plastic
-bass is simple, without any envelopes or fine tweaking
-melodies are very weak
-effects are plain and without context
-the overall structure is missing
-work more on the perc
-sounds like you don't know what you are doing..
Overall personal opinion: the track isn't worth 2 cents.
