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That's it,first one is out.Jekvan-Psychedelic Hobo

jekvan
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Posted : Sep 12, 2011 12:40:33
Probably it ain't finished,but Im way to tired to even look at this track,so I call it finished.Wanna make another one coming.Maybe I'l work on it some day.

Highly melodic,highly me.Booom.



          From all the things I lost,that sandwitch cost me most :)


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Grevinsky
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Posted : Sep 12, 2011 17:34
ooo very nice intro!.
The kick and base is very low you have to push em up.
I like the ambience and how you combine things togheter, You got a very unique style, its like relaxing experimental psy.

Perhaps you could have little more progression, but i like it!.

ya good job man!.           .
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jekvan
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Posted : Sep 12, 2011 18:29
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On 2011-09-12 17:34, Grevinsky wrote:
ooo very nice intro!.
The kick and base is very low you have to push em up.
I like the ambience and how you combine things togheter, You got a very unique style, its like relaxing experimental psy.

Perhaps you could have little more progression, but i like it!.

ya good job man!.




Thanks man...And shit I knew it.For fukk sake,i can't mix the damn kicknbass even if my balls depend on it
Damn,even in the kitchen when I use mixer for whipping stuff,I splatter it all over the place :0.


If I push them up even a bit all the master starts clipping ,must find a way to make them sound higher without raising the volume...           From all the things I lost,that sandwitch cost me most :)


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Suloo
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Posted : Sep 12, 2011 18:48
maybe lower the other sounds then?           -------......-------...-..-..-..-.-.-.-.-
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Posted : Sep 12, 2011 22:25
The track is pretty cool, but mixing needs some improvement.

Keep it flowing:)

Cheers
ierofante


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Posted : Sep 13, 2011 00:52
I think, as already said, that you have to work a lot on the bass and the kick, because the rest of the track is quite good and original, expecially the atmospheres and melodies.
faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht

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Posted : Sep 14, 2011 05:24
great original style i agree, sound need a lot of work, but keep at it there is good promise here           
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aje
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Posted : Sep 16, 2011 17:14
I agree 100% with everyone else, the melodies and atmospheres are great, just the way i like them, deep and contemplative with a bit of nostalgia.

However, the mixing is completely off, i wouldn`t even know where to start. Actually i find it hard to believe that someone who makes these great melodies and atmosphere cannot get a better mix and K/B, it almost sounds like one person did the melodies, and another one the rhythm section.

However, you are very musical, sooner or later the mixing will come to you!

PS: You say K/B starts clipping. Why dont you start the mix by setting K/B just right, and then adjust everything to match the K/B. Thats how I learned to do it anyways.

PPS: What DAW do you use?
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jekvan
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Posted : Sep 16, 2011 17:42
I use FL9.

And it's perhaps my "monitors" are not monitors,but Labtec speakers which are 6 years old,and cost me 200 NIS at that time.

I guess the bass will take the hit most of it if one works on such speakers.

Also,the "clipping" thing is:Because my laptop is also old,most of the stuff is bounced audio,I have litteraly hundred of audio loops in project which are not even plugged to mixer (flstudio routes in directly to main channel).

So instead of lowering volumes of couple of tracks in the mixer,I have to pass one by one audio file to fix their volume in the mix.All I can do is put up the volume of kick and bass,and they are allready up there.

Noob mistakes,but that really the first track that I went all the way from idea to almost finish line.I learned a lot in process and I will try to work more on technicalities in my next track.And be more organized.
As much as my "equipment" allowes me .



Also,to be honest,I can't really mix for shit,the only thing I did for mixing is EQing stuff so it would not collide with bass,and with each other.Sorta.
          From all the things I lost,that sandwitch cost me most :)


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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht

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Posted : Sep 16, 2011 18:01
let me know when you are in tel aviv you are invited           
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