Suloo
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 01:12:48
Mabe a little too cheesy and overall not finished..but would like to know what you think..
cheers
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 01:53
i like it very well
but please finish the track
chance octaves on the bassline or do it with infected bassline in the second part play with the gitar or some other sounds to
i think the track need fx´s
mabe sound´s from the game.
so i hope you have some inspiration now
sry for bad english
Suloo
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 02:07
Ok, thanks for the reply..i will continue with its for sure, make more changes to let it be more modern sounding etc..
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 05:20
I´ll give you my review:
1)Intro could have some more elements, such like percussion.
2)When kick & bass begin I feel like you can work more there, and also theres a crunchy sound that imo you can take off or add some fx to it.
3)The background synth that starts @1:36 sound like out of tone to me, check it out.
4)The transition from 2:21 to 2:24 is terrible! Like 2 different parts with no flow.
5)@3:12 bad break, work more on it.
6)@4:00 Try using more fade ins/outs and give more power to the entrance there, also change the bass so it goes more with the melody.
7)I got bored after 4:49..
I hope this is usefull to you to improve, I dont want to be offensive in any way but the track lacks in many ways so work on it way more, specially with transitions and FX´s.
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Suloo
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 06:07
No its cool man! Kind of detailed reply i would like to read..
in the second part play with the gitar or some other sounds to
