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Tell me the bad parts about my song...150 BPM 'dark'

Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 2, 2007 06:12
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=FB6C060864EC66CE

hey there,

feelin pretty comfortable, could really use some hard criticism to better my sound, technique, whatever... although feel free to tell me what you like too
ZenMind
ZenMind

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Posted : Mar 2, 2007 12:58
Zooopy yeepy kay yey!!! Fucking madness hahaha another producer straight from the ovens of hell. Deamn dude i wouldnt like to bump into this track high on wathever ...run for your lives hehe!!

Ok tecnicaly speaking i cant be of much help im at work listening in a shity pc speakers... i think your first 3 minutes can be improved with rithmics, follow the weird sounds with percusion leaving out the snare...after the break at 2.45+/- you could improvise between snare and percusion. Pay atention to bass and what your doing with sounds theres a lot of room to aplly some changes of groove and notes. This is my opinion bro put it aside and you still have a great crazy track

Keep at it

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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 3, 2007 05:27
Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback. I would agree with everything you said, I am not too happy with the beginning and I haven't changed the bass too much yet because I bounced the fuckin thing and have been lazy .

Thanks again!
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Mar 4, 2007 04:51
you have really clear sounds but I dont think you have much to balance it out most of your sounds are in the high range and it leaves a feeling of emptiness at times in the track if it were me id add some mid range grit here and there or maybe some dirty mid percussion to fill the middle but its still kicked some asses

:chuk:
Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 7, 2007 22:03
Here's an updated version if anyone cares, it's pretty different.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=5CF87F2C047F6C8A
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Mar 7, 2007 22:55
Great sounds I think you are headed to something great here.
Bassixxx


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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 16:36
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Digressio_Traviato
Digressio Traviato

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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 22:13
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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 15, 2007 01:11
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=3F2224CA4D71C742

there you go, guys.
there are some problems with timing in the beginning that really get on my nerves but I have pounded this song into my brain long enough, this track has been put to rest!
R.I.P

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