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Tell me the bad parts about my song...150 BPM 'dark'
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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 2, 2007 06:12
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ZenMind
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Posted : Mar 2, 2007 12:58
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Zooopy yeepy kay yey!!! Fucking madness hahaha another producer straight from the ovens of hell. Deamn dude i wouldnt like to bump into this track high on wathever ...run for your lives hehe!!
Ok tecnicaly speaking i cant be of much help im at work listening in a shity pc speakers... i think your first 3 minutes can be improved with rithmics, follow the weird sounds with percusion leaving out the snare...after the break at 2.45+/- you could improvise between snare and percusion. Pay atention to bass and what your doing with sounds theres a lot of room to aplly some changes of groove and notes. This is my opinion bro put it aside and you still have a great crazy track 
Keep at it 
Boom!
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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 3, 2007 05:27
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Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback. I would agree with everything you said, I am not too happy with the beginning and I haven't changed the bass too much yet because I bounced the fuckin thing and have been lazy .
Thanks again!
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FaceHead
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Posted : Mar 4, 2007 04:51
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you have really clear sounds but I dont think you have much to balance it out most of your sounds are in the high range and it leaves a feeling of emptiness at times in the track if it were me id add some mid range grit here and there or maybe some dirty mid percussion to fill the middle but its still kicked some asses
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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 7, 2007 22:03
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FaceHead
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Posted : Mar 7, 2007 22:55
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Great sounds I think you are headed to something great here.
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 16:36
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Digressio_Traviato
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 22:13
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Zoopy
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Posted : Mar 15, 2007 01:11
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