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techy / progressive tune - improvements well come
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blowa
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Posted : Oct 22, 2009 10:41:53
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hi
Im quite new to producing and feel I'm progressing well. Ive almost finished another tune (about 90%) and im pleased with the outcome.
However, there are still some elements that seem a little detached form the tune. I think that part of this its because i have heard the tune so many times and i'm being over critical for my level, but i'm sure theres some tips what other producers use /do to get every element to bend together.
Ive uploaded my tune. One or two small parts are a little bare. Anyway have a listen and thanks for taking the time to help.
the link is http://www.speedyshare.com/316123878.html
Any tips would be greatly appreciated. |
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Oct 22, 2009 14:25
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you are coming along great.
cool danceable track. i like it.
sry no production judgment from me. sounds good uhmm,, maybe i little intro would not hurt.
i'll listen again.
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Oct 22, 2009 14:30
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ok.,
only thing that sounds detached for me is the snare.
my girlfriend agrees. i usually ask her how my stuff sounds for a honest opinion.
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blowa
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Posted : Oct 22, 2009 17:34
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hey
thanks for the feedback. Might lower the snare volume.
Im pleased you thought it was ok. |
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Oct 22, 2009 21:56
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yeah nice tune.
good luck
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w0lfis
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Posted : Oct 26, 2009 00:01
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In my opinion some more bas and some more power in the kick. but it has potensial 
realy nice work indeed
Best of luck! //w0lfis |
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