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technoish progressive stuff
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jonsta
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 14:54:57
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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 11:13
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Sound could be a bit clearer/louder maybe? The composition seems tight and is what i would call progressive minimal?
128 bpm?
The voice sample maybe a bit louder?
Sounds professional
 
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jonsta
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 17:15
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Nov 14, 2011 11:08
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Im with Galaxy Machine . For me this is not an real progressive and sure not techno , This is just 10 sounds (Or so) Who repeating them self and recycled again and again and again . 75 % of the Techno and Progressive music is based on the power of the down area - The bass and kik , Thats kind of music should take you down with an massive tones , I can't hear bass in your music , This is just air and then all high sounds are barking in mind all over , No interesting breaks , No real mello or atmosphere , Sure theres good sounds here and there but thats not enough . You have alot of work , Add more sounds in and most important creat and bring deepness and force , And if you like/Want i will show you what is real power is .
Happy day !
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jonsta
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Posted : Nov 14, 2011 16:31
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Ok so this is minimal or whatever that's why I don't like to label music genres hehe.
Just some things where I definitely don't agree with you: it's not only 10 sounds, there are actually 42 vsts in this project, 10 of them being diferent vsts; you can't hear the bass??? man get new monitors or headphones then! Now I'm not sure if you are trolling me ahah
It's repetitive maybe, yes, but I like it that way.
I would like to see that real power, please send me a personal message with it 
Thank you for the time to listen and give your opinion Cardinals Cartel. Cheers!
Free album out now:
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/flembaz-tripalle
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Carbuncle
Mushroom Hunters
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Posted : Nov 14, 2011 23:27
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nice one jonsta, looking forward for you upcoming album.. :yey:
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supergroover
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 09:23
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Nice track indeed. But it doesnt seem totally finished to me yet. There still is something lacking to make it really work on the dancefloor. It could use a bit more depth in the sense that it needs a part that is a bit more intense vs quiet in the breaks.
Also the break is quite long. This is a dancefloor killer. At least I would recommend to add some percussion so something is still indicating the tempo/ beat.
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jonsta
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 16:01
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just a preview, still missing some action especially in the mid part from 3:30 till 4:45. I will work on that break for sure 