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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 17:32
Good production
But track lacks flow, until 3:20 there isn't any real movement of percussions and breaks are very simple and half of them don't do the job, there are good ones, but they are all the same
Very strong kick&bass combo, like it very much,
but I noticed that you put it in the first place in the mix and he is static too, just banging with the rest of the sounds and go nowhere...more movement will be good...
This is only my opinion and taste, I listened few times before the post, last time with closed eyes on headphones and it's lacking the soul, whole arrangament sounds DAW-ish, blocks and sounds, not real music or feelings,just skills and production
I don't wanna sound harsh, but this potential must go on higher level, you know your way around DAW and production, use that and make music, not just instant dance track
Equilizyme
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 20:34
A few ideas:
-uploads to soundcloud should be 128kb/s
-your sounds and ideas are good, and the vibe is right, but it needs more movement. these may point you in the right direction:
-at 435 when the high synth line comes in you need some sort of introduction to that sounds, maybe some reverse reverb on that or fade it in during the break or something. This will help add flow to the track.
- IMO the repeated crashes leading up to the breaks and stuff are a bit on the cheesy side, I think this can be fixed by making it more psychedelic. Try FXing the shit out of those repeated crashes, flangers, bitcrushes, panning all over, reverse, 16th note gates, etc.
-the creeping samples "how did you get here" are cool for sure.
-the pad at 7:25 can be turned up.
in conclusion. yes, quite a good track, you are skilled with the DAW and your tracks can be really good really soon. I think you should just spend a bit more time and make it more psychedelic, more flowing. Maybe try listening to your track while not sitting at the computer, this can help.
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Posted : Feb 11, 2012 03:08
Hey Equilizyme & Xsze thanks for the creative feedback. BIG THANKS. Its hard to put your creations online for others to critique but the responses you took time to provide me are very much appreciated. It will help me grow with my productions. THANKS AGAIN!
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