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Take This!!!! Help please?
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 08:16
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my ears need a break im gonna add more psychedelia and i know i need to do something about the melody after the intense break but im stumped also a proper ending so listen and let me know
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thanks again
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 19:22
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also i reworked my kick and bass think it sounds higher quality than old stuff?? |
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 19:28
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Again, Good work man!! 
I liked the melodies and the percussion work. its got a good flow and some good breaks, but i think you could work a little more on the breaks, try and use them more to take the track to another level. Hope you understand!
Also, like you said you need more fx in there i think and maybe some more atmospheres? The drum work sits really well.
I'm sorry i can't give any pro advice as i don't think am qualified!
All i can say is i Dig your music and am looking forward to listening to more.
Good Luck man!!! 
 Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 19:35
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thanks you are right i wondered why these breaks some sounded bland and some sounded like a let down now with you reminding me i think some are the lazy way out just kick rolls and fades thanks
more please anyone??? |
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wiseNevil
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Posted : Oct 4, 2005 21:42
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heya! very nice atmopshere!
you need to work on the kick a lil bit.. it doesnt sound 2 well.. also nice melodys..
good luck
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robomarket
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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 04:15
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Nice beggining. I like the chanting and the swoosh sound. But that kind of stops cold before the kick and bass start to pound.
Work on the snare. Too sharp.
I like how the track builds up @ ~2:30
Not bad at all, considering that you're not a pro.
Keep working man! Good luck. |
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 19:53
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whats wrong twith the kick??? |
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 7, 2005 00:57
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c'mon i know more of you listened to this please at least a quick reply... |
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BLP
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Posted : Oct 9, 2005 13:16
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Hi face...,
i like this tracke.
basse and kicke are realy good... maybee you make little different in the bassline... sorry for my bad englisch
mi inspiration: take a little more delays and reverbs...and stereo effects... i sink the track becomms more psychic....just my opinion....smile
is good work , i like oldstyle with new kicks and bass |
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