psybratt
Devic
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Posted : Aug 6, 2005 00:20
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hi
listening to the track .. the first 22 seconds of the track have this feel to it .. and at 23seconds, the track changes completely .. it's a real turn-off to the dancer on the floor and the listener ..
the track could use some smoother transistion ..
before 2:57min the track sounds very monotonus and not
at 2:57min .. the track is actully going somewhere ..ah finally! ..
but then at around 4min.. the track sounds a little empty .. try adding some atmosphere/pad sounds ..
also need to work on the style .. imho, the track wasn't going anywhere .. just lingering here and there .. definately needs some work on adding some sounds and some work on the structure of the track ..
cannot comment on the production since it's just a 128bitrate mp3 ..
keep working dude .. you'll get there .. just remember it takes a lot of time & effort to perfect it .. just have to be patient ..
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