first thing: these topics belong in the workshop section.
besides that, your track is not bad at all, considering you just started out recently. very clean sounding, nice sound selection and you got a good groove going. i think you should look more into song structure: your intro is very techno- and not very psy-like, which is a good or a bad thing depending on what you want to achieve. also look into how other artists build tension and maintain interest in their tracks.
Ricciardo
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Posted : Sep 25, 2012 12:18
the track sound fairly solid... but the mix is way too much dry
you dont use send aux fx dont you??
like reverb or chorus?
pick a percussive reverb setup with a small room and add it to a SEND, then start adding small % of it to the elements on the mix, its something you dont need to do it with to much intesity most of the time you will not notice big diference perhaps, but it will give more "life" to your main mix...
specialy with percussive elements
the structure is also a bit quiet, but thats normal since you are newbie in terms of production, better that way than chaotic mixes, it means you can built things going solid, just try to add more elements, make ritms and oscilate them, make the people stay with the music and not change the track...
hope it helps
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Posted : Sep 25, 2012 17:33
I'm glad other people than me enjoy listening to Neelix haha
Yeah, about 3-4 months ago.. But i bet i spend the first month watching tutorials and trying to understand all those god damn knobs and buttons on a vst.
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Posted : Sep 25, 2012 23:56
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On 2012-09-25 23:55, Emoticon wrote:
Yeah, about 3-4 months ago.. But i bet i spend the first month watching tutorials and trying to understand all those god damn knobs and buttons on a vst.
i wasn't really refering to synth knowledge, more like arrangements, note distribution, etc.. i'm impressed really..
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On 2012-09-25 23:55, Emoticon wrote:
Yeah, about 3-4 months ago.. But i bet i spend the first month watching tutorials and trying to understand all those god damn knobs and buttons on a vst.
i wasn't really refering to synth knowledge, more like arrangements, note distribution, etc.. i'm impressed really..
Wow Emoticon!!! You're an amazing genius!!! You did great! That's really cool and very clean.
Keep it up bro and make some more! I'd love to spread the word!!!
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Im working on putting in some more sounds and wet'n it up. Like the other guys adviced me to.
It's also the parties thats on my mind when im making music, I wanna make people dance. Hope it will happen some day!
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Posted : Sep 30, 2012 21:22
This is pretty awesome! Love the little quirky sounds and the groove it builds.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
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