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"System Crusher" - progressive tech 137 BPM
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 6, 2008 05:13
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 6, 2008 05:18
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psilonaut
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Posted : Jan 6, 2008 14:05
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 7, 2008 18:20
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 8, 2008 02:28
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Alias
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 8, 2008 02:50
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hi
i think you have some tuning problems! check your bass synth!
nice track in generally with nice ideas! but too much formulated in my opinion!
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 8, 2008 04:10
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Xamanist
Xamanist
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Posted : Jan 8, 2008 16:49
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good production, good sounds and flow!
i agree that the bass needs a better note, maybe 1 half-tone down will do the trick 
boom
Sérgio Xamanist
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 9, 2008 00:58
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Jan 9, 2008 12:32
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Interesting intro with an good feeling in at the atmos point . The combination of the bass kik sound ok when it become a Progressive track but imo not enough for the Tech side (That you want to bring in) - For this the bass sound abit cheesey for my taste , But again its up to you and what you realy want to made , I look now on the atmospheric side and i find it great - Good mello pads in . Didt like the talking in , This man who say "System" , Think its absolutely unnecessary and redundant and kill the all beauty of the all idea (Even if this is the name of the track) Imo its definitely not fit here and also (The talking pad) not clean enough compare to the other sounds in . For the kik .. Again .. If you want to keep it Prog so go for it , For an Tech one .. Maybe need some power in .
Overal realy liket the built of the all concept , There is an good story and some great and far mello synth and in the right places .
Keep the good work .. All the best ! . Cheers ..
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jan 9, 2008 15:32
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Wow thanks for the detailed review!! The track is still in development, so all the tips are usefull ESPECIALLY ones like this! I allready worked a bit on bassline, now it sounds a bit deeper, but it needs a lots of tweaking But hey, this is only one track, there will be massive tech sound, but also deep progressive stuff  Cheers!
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