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Swim with the dolphins
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cr1st0
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 22:08:27
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beowulf
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Posted : Apr 13, 2011 03:23
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I'm probably not the best person to give you any advice, and what can be a finished and a good track for some, can be a unfinished and bad sound for others.
It has some spirit, but I would say it need more work. I would start by elevating more the kick and bass lines... ... simplify the leads, better just one good lead then many not blending well... ...
Keep on playing with the tools, and try to create the sounds that come to your mind instead of using the patches that come with the synths.
Keep it up jovem, o que conta e vontade 
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Vermeee
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 12:57
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those snare are too fuckin loud , the synths u created for the dolphin and the synths that gives the goa feelin s very cool..but obviously the track s all bout those synths so that shows u are just startin ....the bassline sux coz it s the same bassline used all over again for years and as u can see if u listen to the workshop tracks 75 per cent will have that same bassline... = thats bad coz it s just one more fish in the sea...not realy a dolphin...
anyway sounds like u are just startin... good lucky in ur way...
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panike
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 21:01
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