makus
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Posted : May 13, 2012 23:30
stop seeing it as the intro and start feeling it as a equal part of the track. add more movement, some breaks maybe and you won't need to cut this beautiful thing.
generally reminds me a bit of Cosma - Simplicity.
@ 4:16 i want more stuff to happen finally, open hats, melodies, drugs, chicks, fucking celebration
production wise it is pretty ok, but the kick and bass lack low end, to me. finish the track and it will be classy.
PS
this is an amazing example of how to treat long intros
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 24, 2012 02:30
hello,
i agree with FAxi. the kick sounds better in the first example you posted. good ideas though! nice atmosphere maybe it would be easier to continue if you bring the bass down an octave? just a thought...
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jekvan
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Posted : May 26, 2012 06:33
Yes,the reason it sounds weird is presence of Ozone on master channel,I wanted the track to sound bigger,and my track started to sound weird.
Bass down an octave ? Why,what is wrong with the bass?
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