Oliveira
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Posted : May 23, 2011 01:49:18
Hi; I need some good adwises for this track. still working on it..... / Johan
minus
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Posted : May 23, 2011 01:56
yo, i like the second half of the track, love the goa bounce u make with those bass note changes,, but little monotonous it gets, keep it interesting by making some more intellegent bass changes,and make first half more interesting,also u missing some good leads, and work more on those percussions, its comming along just fine,keep workin
bom
Oliveira
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Posted : May 24, 2011 04:11
@minus: thanks for feedback! Here is the result..
Midnight Sun
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Posted : May 24, 2011 08:02
Oliveira
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Posted : May 24, 2011 12:51
@protodrive. thanks bro
Oni Katsu
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Posted : May 25, 2011 05:39
"Det må du!" xD
yeaah, i really like this.
The bass is really cool i think, its warm and all your sounds are realy strong! do you distort them a lot?
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I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
Freeflow
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Posted : May 25, 2011 11:09
I think you miss a main melody or main element to drive this one home.
A lead, a atmosphere that is out of the ordinary that the track has.
There is room for improvements, Also some nice tom fills would be cool, and other kinds of fills...
Drunken Monk
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Posted : May 25, 2011 19:59
niice one.. very good kick and bass.. rolls nice with the rest of the track
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Oliveira
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Posted : May 27, 2011 18:38
@ oni katsu: "Det må du!" haha no I dont use a ordinary distplugin, but I love to use highpassfilters at the synthshoots.
@ freeflow: the track is under construction. I will take your thoughts with me, and perhaps make som groovy drums/perc/leads:) be patience
aciduss
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Posted : Jun 2, 2011 17:33
Nice track dude, i believe u could use some variation on percussion since all track seem to have the same loop. Also a secondary open hat or ride could add some flavor.
