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Ascension
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Posted : Oct 19, 2011 05:25:50
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klippel
Stereofeld
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Posted : Oct 19, 2011 10:09
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well mate,
kick bass combo cool, tempo cool. soundstage too narrow, focus on a more wide stereo field and send more fx and sounds around in the place.
first part is a bit annoying with the repititive sounds, second part after first break is getting better and more varied.
work a bit on more variety and wider sound and make the first part more interesting ( i have the same issues, so i know what i am talking about ;-) )
keep working it hast potential
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"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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Ascension
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Posted : Oct 19, 2011 20:10
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Thanks for the comments. The beginning is intentionally repetitive (didn't mean for it to get annoying) to kind of lul the listener and create more contrast to the part where the dnb style percussion comes in.
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