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vision dream
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Posted : Feb 15, 2010 00:48:21
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i just made this demo and i would like to hear about some advice to get btter skills in eq and mixing, and help to get up my nivel of musical knowledge. and surely do next time the better!
the demos are in myspace
http://www.myspace.com/visiondream
freakigital@hotmail.com
GuadalajaraJal - MexiqueEarth
tunnin up 2012
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ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Feb 22, 2010 17:30
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Ok, overall quality was good. My biggest piece of advice would be to change up your bassline more. Whenever you have a break the bass comes in just as before and it feels very anticlimactic. Try doubling up the bass (a note on every 16th beat or whatever) after the break to give a sense the song building, gaining energy.
If you think that would change what you are going for then perhaps just adding some some simple resonance filter modulation to the bass (after the break) to make it sound a bit more interesting and, as I said, make the song sound like it is developing. Or, to give the same impression, add in some more symbols after the break. Or anything to that effect, I think you get what I mean.
My other piece of advice is about key and melody. I noticed your bass and the leads you had weren't always really in key with eachother. This is completely forgivable because how to play things in key is not at all obvious for people who haven't studied music theory. But I think not knowing how also really limits your melody and progression because you can't make anything complicated.
That is harder to fix, I would say just look up some basics of scales and chord progression. Then try to keep those things in mind when you are entering your notes next time.
Other than that the samples and stabs sounded great. Work on the things I mentioned and you will have some quality tracks! |
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dija
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Posted : Mar 1, 2010 10:57
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