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Sunlight Society
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Vishudda
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : May 2, 2012 22:52:39
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pointsource
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Posted : May 4, 2012 03:20
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Nice tracks!
The only thing that I don't like is that syncopated bassline that kicks in after the second break (The Rise) and the one in Synthetic Memories (that kicks in after the 3rd break).
That's a really turn off for me, just kills all the energy that have been built before that... ah well, that's just me, I never enjoyed that kind of beat.
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : May 4, 2012 12:54
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Hello there Vishudda ..
Track no' 1 :
Here is a good example of some one who know how to use and keep the air (Right) inside the track . Very interesting stuff , Deep , Rhythmic (Mean for this kind of style , Sure this is not Dark) ,With an good energy , Warm and tribal .
Sure there work to do , (Less on the sound) But sure more ideas to pull in , You have the power and the drive (Down area) For the 'Hoes' Now bring some up there for the soul - More atmosphers , More fx's (For the mind) and so (Try creat more background levels) , Will open the track much more And/So you will feel the differents/Changes - Will bring you some more space and cinematic feeling into your storys - Place to be in/Between .
About no' 2 :
Nice production , Imo need some sound work of mix and so (Or its my taste only) Less dim bass - Bring it be more clean and clear Will be much more possible listening to , Imo killing the all good story inside .
3 :
Alot of sounds i didt liket in (Taste) And so the overal sound is far then being perfect , This track need more work also with more leads , Loops and so I have the feeling he is very empty .
Keep the good work ! .
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Nomad Moon
IsraTrance Full Member
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1516
Posted : May 4, 2012 14:58
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I'm with Cardinals, but "The Beat" is a very complete track, heard it 3 times, and gonna listen at home later, really good sounds |
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Equilizyme
IsraTrance Junior Member
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593
Posted : May 4, 2012 20:09
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1: diggin the psychedelic house. imo this is a sweet genre. i do think that around 4.00 it needs to have more going on tho to keep it interesting and psychedelic. house's biggest downfall its that it sounds like the same loop playing for 7 minutes.
2: i dig the sample at the beginning, but you should leave it at just that one, the others make it too many. but i dig the overall vibe
3: the vibe of the first section is cool, but it doesnt seem complete yet. missing lots of details and complexity. second section is also a good start, but again, a lot can still be done.
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