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Suggestions for improvement for my new track ;)
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Disrupted
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 19:02
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That hits in the intro is way too loud compare to your main. Lower it and ull gain volume after.
Kick need more low freq, bass doesn't sound enough percussive it might need some enveloppe tweaking.
Got some nice idea and great synth.
The second part after the bridge could come earlier.
Great track!
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magner
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 19:54
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Disrupted
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Posted : Apr 13, 2011 02:12
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On 2011-04-12 19:54, magner wrote:
Cheers dude i appreciate  , for the kick you mean more low subs or mid lows?, thanks again.
Peace!
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Around 50-120 Hz to be precise.
My music http://soundcloud.com/disrupted |
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magner
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Posted : Apr 13, 2011 09:25
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to be honest it made no difference, so i just reprogrammed the kick , will re-upload it with the new kick and have a listen, cheers
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 01:08
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U probably should use 2 kicks, one for the real lows and other for the mid-highs,tweak them so they compliment each other, and for the bassline you should do that also, listen to Disco Holigans and Wizack Twizack's tracks on headphones and compare to your own and you will get an ideia of how things sound
And to begin, kick ands bass should be mono and center, from that u can start experimenting 
Make it BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM! |
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psyraal
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 01:12
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magner
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 02:41
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On 2011-04-14 01:08, Nomad Moon wrote:
U probably should use 2 kicks, one for the real lows and other for the mid-highs,tweak them so they compliment each other, and for the bassline you should do that also, listen to Disco Holigans and Wizack Twizack's tracks on headphones and compare to your own and you will get an ideia of how things sound
And to begin, kick ands bass should be mono and center, from that u can start experimenting
Make it BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
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I changed the kick completely , now it rocks! , i discovered bassizm, great tool indeed, had it and never used it until now!, will upload the track with the new kick tomorrow, and like 'nychrologic' said, listen to it from the megaupload link (wav file)i will post, not sound cloud
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Vermeee
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 12:41
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i liked a lot the synths u created very good very acid very psychedelic
but out of it the kick s lackin energy and its soundin hollow ....
and the track s very repetitive the progression feels like no progression and the second half of the track sounds like its there just to make the track longer...
and the drums feels like the drummer s hitin some stuffs in the wrong time ( like the crashes in every 8 bars and etc..sounds like the track s not followin those 8 bars standarts... )
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 12:54
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On 2011-04-14 01:12, NychroLogic wrote:
but listen in mp3 format, not soundcloud format
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If i'm not mistaken NychroLogic was refering to listening the Disco Holigans and Wizack tracks in mp3, alltough they sound good even at soundcloud format |
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psyraal
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 13:18
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Yes, if you want to understand and learn something with the 'pros' tracks, you should check them in mp3 format, but then again, soundcloud is the fastest way and the most non-boring way to hear a song
Peace
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