icedice
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Posted : Jan 12, 2012 16:12:37
Hello all!
I'm kinda of stuck, not just with this track but in generel. Seems as i lost my creativity and also my overall sound quality is not too good...
Some comments on this track might help me moving on (at least I hope so..)
All comments are welcome.
Redshift
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Posted : Jan 12, 2012 17:43
Hi,
Didn't like the intro much but the drop is 1:50 is nice. But you need to get some variation into the song after that.
THe lead at 2:45 needs more power and it needs to be preceded with a break.
Nice drop at 3:40 but again same problem: its not going anywhere.
Overall, I think the track is too quiet and reserved. It needs a great big kick up the ass to get it going, I think
Keep on going, and good luck.
Redshift
icedice
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Posted : Jan 12, 2012 18:34
Thanks a lot Redshift! I will look in to it using your advice and post results later....
