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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 14, 2010 05:02:23
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 14, 2010 07:26
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good work bro..!!  ) |
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Oct 14, 2010 17:24
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 16, 2010 03:54
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minus
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Posted : Oct 16, 2010 10:44
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sound a little monotonic,your percussion work is rather poor, or minimal effort, work there, percussion will give you the flow,and some more atmospheric soundmsome nice twists you make , and decent bassline switches and flow elements, work it bro,explore more this kindo sound, direction is good
peace
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 16, 2010 11:04
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 Im gettin there-------->
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 19, 2010 16:52
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minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Oct 19, 2010 21:47
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all I can listen to is kick and bass...
it is covering everything.
the leads need to stand out and so does the percussion.
more breaks work well in this kind of sound 2.
As it is now it feels very booring like mentioned b4 here.
try adding breaks every 8/16 bars and introduce new things each time, bass changes, percussion changes, new leads, same leads listen b4 in the track but off beat or with diferent notation or texture...etc...
And never quit improving...
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 20, 2010 05:49
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^^ thank you! seriously, the comments that we dont want to hear are often the ones most needed...
So I've done a lot more work today with the comments in mind... I'll have it up in a little bit.
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 20, 2010 11:58
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Maine Coon
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Posted : Oct 21, 2010 18:22
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Cool sound, interesting ideas.
The thing I have a problem with here is the overall flow of the track.
The first half of the track stands still (well, it twirls on the same spot, occasionally raising a hand or stomping a foot). It sounds like sketches (8-bar?), ideas for an upcoming track, variations of some sort. Somehow, there is no progression there. You twirl left, then you twirl right – but you don’t move forward. I am not a music critic, so I can’t explain it better. It’s just that the first 3 and half minutes sound very static, even though the music seems to be energetic and it changes at regular intervals. Not sure how one would fix that (I myself am noob and all I have is a bunch of sketches with no overall flow). :-(
The second half has a forward movement, but the music goes into the opposite extreme: it seems like 3-4 pieces taken from totally different tracks and connected into a potpourri. Each one of them is quite cool, and transitions between them are well done – but they seem just too different (especially when they come after over 3 minutes of very little variation).
I feel bad writing negative things without offering any suggestions on how to correct them. Haven’t learnt it myself yet. But you or somebody else here may know what to do.
Good luck.
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Scenix
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Posted : Oct 21, 2010 18:40
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Imo u need to get the velocity higher on the kicks and bass. bcs right now it oly sounds like u have alot of sounds. but in all it's a intresting track!
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 23, 2010 06:48
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mudpeople
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Posted : Oct 23, 2010 10:33
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