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Sspat - Flydream, a proggy theme
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Patrik
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Posted : Feb 19, 2009 03:05:28
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Hello! This is my latest work, a 130 bpm proggy track. Im involved in music making for nearly 6 years now, but didnt made anything public for a long time. I appreciate any comments on it. Thank you!
http://www.karavanmsk.ru/Sspat_-_Flydream.mp3 |
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Patrik
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Posted : Feb 20, 2009 12:56
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Uploaded it in higher quality. C'mon no one likes prog here?) |
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shellbound
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Posted : Feb 21, 2009 02:41
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this is a nicely done track. production-wise, it's really good. your top end is great. really shimmering and pro sounding. the only complaint is the kick. it feels like it needs to be either a bit more punchy or just higher in the mix. but not by a lot, as everything is pretty balanced and sounds good as it is.
musically, i felt the 2nd half was a letdown. you build it up nicely until the break. but what happens after the break is less interesting than what happened before.
but it definitely sounds like you know what you are doing. good job. tak derzhat. |
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Patrik
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Posted : Feb 21, 2009 13:12
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Thank you very much for the detailed comment! |
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