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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jan 2, 2011 01:45:32
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vector_0
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 04:33
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sounds pretty good. i'd suggest making the drops a bit more dramatic tho...like add a crash or something. this is just stylistic advice though, maybe you don't want that.
also, i'd try turning the bass down just a touch and see how this affects the rest of the sounds. right now i'm not at home and listening on laptop speakers though, so I could be way off "bass" here (nyuk nyuk...) but the bass is quite dominant in the mix
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aciduss
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Posted : Jan 8, 2011 05:48
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OK, i like the overall mood of the track.
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- Bass kick combo previous to 1:00 mark is too distorted.
- Hi hat loop is poor, get more samples there, work it a little, more than one bar loop would be nice too.
- 3:20 i like
- Your sections seem mostly well arranged but lack of lifters and / or stabby elements to show they begin / end.
- 5:06 i like the lead, the mix is blurry tho.
- 5:53 too obvious db_glitch
Your sound palette is not bad, but the mix can get much better, also most of the sections are just a loop over and over, you need more variation and mindcandy sounds, flybys and creative sound editing.
You seem to have nice ideas, just have to work them a little bit more, make them shine u know?
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jan 9, 2011 01:49
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