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billy ambulance
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Posted : Jun 12, 2003 12:42
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the machismo libido
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Posted : Jun 15, 2003 08:38
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gr8 work man!
nice tracks & nice melodies.
Recpect!
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parapsyched
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Posted : Jun 16, 2003 02:59
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nicely done !
if i may say...
keep up the good work...
heard something about a record deal coming up... is it true?
 if u dig deep enough u just might reach the sky...
"dream is destiny"
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parapsyched
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Posted : Jun 20, 2003 18:57
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Pavel
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Posted : Jun 22, 2003 18:51
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Well first of all the man on the pictures looks like my dad when he was young... where the hell did you get it?
Well, the first track includes very nice vocoded vocal, which stays too much IMO, the twisted sounds are very nice, but their volume is too high.
And another thing is the track too dry. Put some reverb man. And the bass volume is little too high i think...
The second work is another story, very interesting sounds and very nice bassline+percussion. Sounds little offbeat sometimes which is nice i think. The track is little dry i thing. And mixing could be better. And the melody in the end is not that nice... Overall nice tune.
The 3rd track hass massive bassline and scratching sounds all over the place and some unwelcome pads here and there. Could be better track but too bad it doesn't go anywhere.
Overall. Nice work, and good luck
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billy ambulance
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Posted : Jun 29, 2003 13:13
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well, all the tracks are without mix or master they are only after mixdown.
ninja got some nice notes but i`m not gonna change nothin in those tracks, not that I setisfy with them but Im working on new tracks!
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IntelabeaM
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Posted : Jun 29, 2003 16:25
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hy there billy
well i gave a listen to u'r treck "morning glory"..for some reson i'v been getting not's that i have a treck by that name ( and i dont have ..hehe..) so i had to know what it's about.
well...u have some nice sound's there, some nice idea's for lead's but u'r treck is meesing alot of thing's. first of all the kick and the bass r not mix'd together in the right way, some time's the bass disapear's inside the kick..if i where u i would change bouth the kick and the bass.
secound is the story, it doesnt build up to much, there is a lead that is leading but as ninja said, leading no where...
well there r many thing's to wark on and i think u made the right choise not to wark on this treck's any more and go on making new one's, but if u want my edvise..dont rush in to finishing a treck fast( god know's i use'd to do it alot), try to make it more complecsed , more sound's, more precation's, more brack's, most importent is sound, if the kick and the bass would sound good together then the rest of the mix will be easyer.
all and all, keep on warking , keep on discavering new thing's ( there r allway's new stuf ) and ...good luck 
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the machismo libido
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Posted : Jul 3, 2003 15:00
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ive listen again to the tracks and the part that ninja said it dont go to nowhere..well I like it like this its kinda stay on groove without trying to reach nothing ..thats cool..
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