RhinoCeros
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 22:15:22
Hello Beautiful ppl please can you give me some critics on this track all are welcome i have been having a hard time with the ending so i have left it at this for now
the lead in the beginning seems to be off at some points. structurewise i'd suggest to have something happen every 8 bars like leave a kick/bass out or something, otherwise it becomes really boring even if the lead is slightly changing...
from the musicaly view you're already good, just go on, you will improve automaticly and as you are saying having trouble with the end - sometimes its good to lay it down for one or two days and get a fresh mind 'n head cheers
RhinoCeros
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Posted : Apr 18, 2013 01:57
Fungophago Thanks for listening,, your critics are great thank you as you said maybe give it a day or 2 as for the 8 bars i know what you mean cool
please can you give me some critics on this track all are welcome i have been having a hard time with the ending so i have left it at this for now
