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Sound Razer - Freedom for All.. fullon in progress.. Feedback..
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Sound Razer
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Posted : Jul 26, 2011 23:06:26
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Sound Razer
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Posted : Jul 28, 2011 13:01
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jul 28, 2011 14:19
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1.at the end of the intro the two melodies fake when they play together. and i think the note of the bassline has no connection to them also.
2. bassline is not clean enough. you should work on it.
3. you need to work more on your sounds and on the mix. all your sounds are not bright enough. there is no one sound i can say it's realy good, besides the bozooki, or whatever instrument it is, from the intro.
4. i don't like the phrase that starts at 2:57. i think there is a note there that is not in your musical scale.
5. i think you need some big break somewhere here in the middle. i would make 16 bars break after your first melody.
6. the arrangementis pretty good. you know how to make night fullon.
p.s: you love azax syndrom. don't you? 
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Sound Razer
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Posted : Jul 28, 2011 17:14
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haha.. tnk u chike.. your feedback is fantastic..
yeah my fave is Azax, my teacher.. )
i will fix it.. it's not done..  )
i try to reach the world..!!  |
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jul 28, 2011 19:05
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