after quiet a long break started working on some stuff....
There is a small error in the arrangement at the end... an arp randomly starts playin which is to be edited.
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Pls do let me know ur views!
Thanks!
supergroover
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Posted : Jul 16, 2011 10:49
It could still use some more sounds to fill it up. It is still a bit minimal at the moment.
The break is also a bit minimal.
If you want usefull feedback it is better to post (almost) finished tracks. It can still change so much before it is finished that it doesnt make alot of sense to give feedback on 2 minute pieces.
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Jul 17, 2011 12:51
So i think you should change the arrangemnt, i teel you this because it happens to me also, we dig this part of the track and then we go with it , i could try something like this: the raw lead that comes at 0.40ish beggins the track, then kick bass and stuff, before the break the man talks, small break and then what come after 1.40, this is just my view dont't take it too serious and keep it going
psyraal
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Posted : Jul 17, 2011 14:05
I can only say that there's something missing (something ambiental) in your big break but i think you can manage to put something interesting in that part.
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Jul 17, 2011 17:05
yo homie dig the part starting 1.00... too bad it end soon that arpy is real good..
arp comin in after the break is nice too.. and like super said you cant expect much feedback on 2min sound... sit this one out and chk the flows.. cheers
re-arrange what you thought was real
thanks a ton for the reviews!!! i have worked on it over the night and made a few changes.... however it still needs a lot of fill up... will get done by tmmrw and upload the new version
wanted to noe what u guys think on the production quality... overall mix and eq?
kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jul 18, 2011 11:11
like everyone said something is missing...i think u should work on the percs more..its to basic...the break needs to be filled...dead silence only works sometimes i think.after the break things picked up good though.
The miz and Eq i think are good.
Peace.
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fractal fields
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Posted : Jul 18, 2011 21:54
hey i like the tune,
got a nice drive and athmo, maybe do somthing more with some elements you feel like doing more with, if that makes sense :s
Hear from a distance and dive back into the deep ...
, i could try something like this: the raw lead that comes at 0.40ish beggins the track, then kick bass and stuff, before the break the man talks, small break and then what come after 1.40, this is just my view dont't take it too serious and keep it going 
