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Song under progress, feedback appreciated.

Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member

Started Topics : 75
Posts : 685
Posted : Apr 24, 2012 16:45:44

Hello people.
Im nearly finished with this song but ive been listening and working with it waaay to much now the past 2 days so im very tired of it.

I would like some fresh ears too listen too it who can maybe point out some errors ive missed.

I am aware of that synth which makes the melody in the later part is too low , that is fixed now tho.

Thank you!.

Ps Final mix down has not been done yet, so the mix will perhaps be a little bit muddy.

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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species

HallunX

Started Topics : 5
Posts : 34
Posted : Apr 24, 2012 20:38

Nice track ! Best job start at 4:30 ! Love it !

COMET SHELL
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 50
Posts : 577
Posted : Apr 24, 2012 21:08

nice track, my 4 week old son is soaking up the vibes and danceing with a smile on his face.
i cant comment on the mix because im listening in my headphones. but i like the track mate.

Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posts : 685
Posted : Apr 24, 2012 21:47

Thank you listening and for the nice comments

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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species

Equilizyme
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 19
Posts : 593
Posted : Apr 25, 2012 00:40

You have some pretty neat atmosheres going on at 2.00, but I think they could make an appearance sooner to grab the listeners attention off the bat.

The snare at 3.30 sounds very dry, but it sort of fits, if it were me i would toy with more verb on that thing but idk. i would for sure try it tho.

This is beautiful at 5.00

excellent job!

The transition to the new feel at 6.00 might be a bit abrupt. Also the bass in this new section is too plucky i think, I have to work get a handle on what note it is, this might be fixed by incresing the decay on that synth slightly.

Awesome tune mate! you have a cool vibe going on

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http://soundcloud.com/equilizyme
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Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member

Started Topics : 75
Posts : 685
Posted : Apr 26, 2012 14:23

Thank you for the feedback.
Yeah perhaps i introduce something abit earlier, a sound or so.

Ill check out with the snare, thanks for pointing it out.

I am abit unsure of the base in the whole song. But in a way it works with it little darker and mouldy sound, i try increasing the decay abit in the later part and see if i can save it

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Thanks for the comment.

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On 2012-04-25 00:40, Equilizyme wrote:
You have some pretty neat atmosheres going on at 2.00, but I think they could make an appearance sooner to grab the listeners attention off the bat.

The snare at 3.30 sounds very dry, but it sort of fits, if it were me i would toy with more verb on that thing but idk. i would for sure try it tho.

This is beautiful at 5.00 excellent job!

The transition to the new feel at 6.00 might be a bit abrupt. Also the bass in this new section is too plucky i think, I have to work get a handle on what note it is, this might be fixed by incresing the decay on that synth slightly.

Awesome tune mate! you have a cool vibe going on

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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species

Nomad Moon
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posts : 1516
Posted : Apr 26, 2012 19:55

great atmos, great track, i would shorten or remove the 2.15 break its to soon, but thats just my oppinion.
On the contrary the 4 min break is amazing

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