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SomeGuyPsy (Feedback needed)
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SomeGuyPsy
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 23:07:50
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Geom3
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 23:24
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not keen on bassline high notes - but rest got potential and its a start if anything...nice intro 
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SomeGuyPsy
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 23:28
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Thanks for the feed bro |
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 1, 2013 02:51
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1.50 minutes isn't enough to give you any type of criticism man.. just about every one who starts making psy can do this in the first couple of years, and specially in the tune you showed there is nothing distinctive, nothing special, nothing new.. A kick, a bass, some perc, and some fx going on, anyone using presets and with a bit of patience can get there and do this.
Finish the track and show us then (and post it in the proper section -> the workshop section!).
IMO, make it faster, give it a bit of more groove, design some creative and new instruments and play with them, and bring something new to the scene
Also, there's more you can do in the mix to bring out the power of the kick + bass (people should be feeling this in their chest, in psy it should be the most prominent part of the tune
Keep going!
(edit: I noticed the tags you gave your sound on SC, did you intend to make dark psy?) Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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SomeGuyPsy
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Posted : Apr 1, 2013 03:18
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Okay, thanks for the feed, and sorry for the misplace of the topic..
Nice to hear something i can work on!
Thanks bro! |
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frisbeehead
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 1, 2013 23:54
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You have a nice flow going already. About KB: if you're going to use such variations in pitch, like you do here, an octave or so, try to get a more even volume across all notes - this can mean compression, but also something like "velocity to amp volume", fine adjustments or whatever. It doesn't sound bad to me. Could have more meat in the subs. You can easily put it there with another layer. Since it seems like you need the mids to swing a sort of big range and to be up front.
I like the drum patterns and the way the drums sound. Focus more on the leads and their interaction, try to make a story. This is what's lacking the most here, even though this is a very short sample, make things sing together. And make use of the stereo width! Keep going! |
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SomeGuyPsy
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 04:12
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I have finished the track, and posted it (in the right place this time ) Hope u will give it a listen |
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