harryohm
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Posted : Jan 29, 2011 08:48:32
looking for likes and dislikes and some constructive criticism.
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Thanks guys !
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Posted : Jan 29, 2011 21:53
real nice groovy track bru,nice flow, nice bass changes, vocals used decently,expecially like the ending bit, ok input, bro some sounds in there r the same loops over n over again, wok on them, start by doing minor changes in bassline notes, as like a progression, adding note by note, also work on ur percussive arrangements,some of them r good but some need more work,maybe try layering more percussions over these ones, maybe you can also pass second layer of percussion through a flanger and delay, and see the effect! try also using some atmospheric sounds at the back, rest is good bro, keep it like this
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harryohm
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Posted : Jan 30, 2011 16:12
Hey bro !
thanks a ton for the insightful inputs ...really awesome of you make such points. this track was a days work. and i was gettind the ear fatigue syndrome by the end of it. but couldn't help sharing it and gettin some views on it and obviously this was not the final version. i shall try and make it much more refined...keepin your suggestions in mind. And yes i do tend to get loopy at times...with my production ..therefore still an amateur.. still trying to beat my limitations...well its all a never ending learning process and thanks to people like you.
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MeditationProfonde
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Posted : Feb 1, 2011 12:03
Nice ! I like the bass. There seems to be a bit of noise though, don't know where it comes from.
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harryohm
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Posted : Feb 1, 2011 16:11
yes ..another friend of mine had told me about the bass issue. the thing is that I am making music in very poor damaged speakers. I guess the Bass needs more EQ on it, clean up some unwanted frequencies. hopefully ..i can do a better job.
Thanks a lot for listening and appreciating Profonde.
and obviously this was not the final version. i shall try and make it much more refined...keepin your suggestions in mind. And yes i do tend to get loopy at times...with my production 
