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Some new tracks i;ve made. Suggestions on tightening up the whole thing please! :)

The_Contraption

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Posted : Mar 7, 2012 10:05:45

so listen if you will! downloads available. here goes... Feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated! thanks.

Renaissance 2012

Will of The Whispers

Return to Pangea

if you like them you can download the whole latest free album at my soundcloud account.

Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posts : 685
Posted : Mar 7, 2012 11:11

I listen to the first song.
Nice and solid base, i would say a bit much mid freq(this was in the first part) but thats perhaps a matter of taste.
Interesting sounds and good structure.
You nail it at 2.17

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Funky break at 4.32, i like that.
The melody which comes in at 5.15 is very low, perhaps its meant to be, but i would boost it.

I would hit it harder at 6:30-6:50 cause its the last climax, , and fatten up the snare abit which comes at 6:50.

Nice end also.

I think very good track, i like it. Good work.

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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species

Trance Forum ť ť Forum The Workshop - Some new tracks i;ve made. Suggestions on tightening up the whole thing please! :)