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Some groovy shaite!

A.Rosengren
Solid Snake

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Posted : Mar 24, 2003 23:29
http://www.star-jelly-records.com/anders/FoggyFroggySketch.mp3


tell me what i should improve except that god damn goa melodie

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Gilad Refael
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Posted : Mar 25, 2003 18:39
ok lets start
like always, i'm writing this while listening so don't expect any structure or shit like that

tomtoms are way cool
kick is a little dirty, i don't know if this on purpose or cause of the quality but i don't like it.
nice percussion work and bassline.
2:15 those grooves kick ass
didn't like the transition on 4:01
5:00 - i didn't like, the delay makes it sound off beat, plus its barely has presence through the hard percussion.

all in all, a real groover. need some extra work but it sure has SJ pontential



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BrainStorm
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Posted : Mar 27, 2003 20:01

the kicks are too loud, no bass sounds at all?
maybe add single bass note sometimes or running bassline..
"bangas" and percussions are ok
synth sounds are very unique, like the vibes.. reminds me of GMS for some reason ;-)

the breaks are mostly ok
the quality isnt that good..
a bit repetitve and not massive enough (but it maybe subjective opinion..)

what style do you put it in?
i'd say its kind of Goish Progressive... not Full On, because no bass sounds at all


Jason (LyTe)
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Mar 27, 2003 20:18
clear your ears Brainstorm. there's bass there...

anyway, kick bass needs more work andres dear, but other than that, I Like what i hear. good percussion lines, great synths and melody, nice total groove.
now, take your lead kick some 3db downwards, and up your bass some 2db, eq, compress and your set.           "We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb

LyTe Email:TechnoLyte@gmail.com
A.Rosengren
Solid Snake

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Posted : Mar 27, 2003 20:59
Personally i think this track suck deep shit


but im happy u like it....


its a piece of shit haha

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