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slow groovy and chilled progressive

alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 01:29:13
have a listen,

i'm thinking the mix is maybe a bit bright..........

please let me know what you think - whether you like it or not

http://www.zshare.net/audio/13887283abf30385/
Hidra
Hidra

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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 06:28
very very nice!

I really enjoyed it! great vibe!

only detail, the bass you have every 4bars that goes "woooommpp" might be a little bit to hard on the low end....

you might want to eq it out a little...

except that, everything is great..

keep it up



alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 06:53
thanks man,

yeah i think you might be right about that woooooomp sound.

i just listened to the track you have up on your myspace and i have to say it is absolutely gorgeous!
lovely tune mate.........
Hidra
Hidra

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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 07:19
glad you like it

have anything else of your work I could listen to?
alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 21, 2008 23:00
not really anything recent, its all half finished....

im working on it though
Hidra
Hidra

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Posted : Jun 22, 2008 00:46
ok

hit me up when you get more stuff finished
Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : Jun 23, 2008 15:22
Sounds really great to me!

Didnt like the monk sound in the beggining, you could remove it or use a different synth there. (the sound that starts in 0:29 ends in 0:40). I wouldn't use it at all.

Percussions are good!
You need to fill up the gaps, you have virtually no synths till 2:54. It feels kinda empty to me. More small fx and melodies will be good.
Atmosphere is great. all is good enough except of the lack of a bit more sounds.
About the "wooo", you should lower it and maybe cut few low freqs. It makes some clipping.

Good work man!

Misha

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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 24, 2008 21:12
thanks man

i think we have different tastes. i crticised your track for having too much going on, you critcised mine for not having enough

i quite like the emptiness of the first few minutes, i feel it gives what comes in later more impact. although i do think maybe some more small fx could be good.

thanks for your comments tho i will have to get round to sorting out that wooop sound at some point.
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