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slow groovy and chilled progressive
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 01:29:13
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Hidra
Hidra
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 06:28
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very very nice!
I really enjoyed it! great vibe!
only detail, the bass you have every 4bars that goes "woooommpp" might be a little bit to hard on the low end....
you might want to eq it out a little...
except that, everything is great..
keep it up 
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 06:53
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thanks man,
yeah i think you might be right about that woooooomp sound.
i just listened to the track you have up on your myspace and i have to say it is absolutely gorgeous!
lovely tune mate......... |
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Hidra
Hidra
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Posted : Jun 20, 2008 07:19
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glad you like it
have anything else of your work I could listen to?
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 21, 2008 23:00
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not really anything recent, its all half finished....
im working on it though |
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Hidra
Hidra
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Posted : Jun 22, 2008 00:46
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ok
hit me up when you get more stuff finished
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Jun 23, 2008 15:22
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Sounds really great to me!
Didnt like the monk sound in the beggining, you could remove it or use a different synth there. (the sound that starts in 0:29 ends in 0:40). I wouldn't use it at all.
Percussions are good!
You need to fill up the gaps, you have virtually no synths till 2:54. It feels kinda empty to me. More small fx and melodies will be good.
Atmosphere is great. all is good enough except of the lack of a bit more sounds.
About the "wooo", you should lower it and maybe cut few low freqs. It makes some clipping.
Good work man!
Misha
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alfalfa
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 24, 2008 21:12
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thanks man
i think we have different tastes. i crticised your track for having too much going on, you critcised mine for not having enough
i quite like the emptiness of the first few minutes, i feel it gives what comes in later more impact. although i do think maybe some more small fx could be good.
thanks for your comments tho  i will have to get round to sorting out that wooop sound at some point.
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