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Skëlp - Karma Strikes Back
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Skėlp
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Posted : Mar 7, 2006 22:09
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Hi there, this is my new track, hope you like it:
http://www.megaupload.com/pt/?d=2S72FM52
I would like you to tell me what you like and dislike the most - be in mind that I want the sound to be kind of confusing...
BOOM!
  "Fantasy is a part of reality"
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Skėlp
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Posted : Mar 8, 2006 14:44
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Can I have one comment, please?? 
"Fantasy is a part of reality"
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Skėlp
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Posted : Mar 8, 2006 22:10
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Freeflow
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Posted : Mar 9, 2006 02:35
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hello mate... the track is way to extended, considering the elements you have in it...
the lead gets annoying after sometime, you should expand it and build on counterparts...
do you really have the story laid out?
does everything make sense for you?
if i would try to interpret the story from the sounds and not the title, its a about somebody doing a bad mistake and now gets haunted by this evil annyoing lead.... hehe which if we go back to the title could be bad karma..
but im sure you could make it more interesting..
i mean there must happen other things, the guy thats being haunted maybe trips and have to cravle back up, but the bad karma is catching up with him...
well you get my drift i hope...
otherwise i think there are pretty good sounds.. just work more on the story maybe?
and make more interesting breaks...
Work work work... 
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Skėlp
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Posted : Mar 9, 2006 14:37
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Thanx for the tips! You've guessed the story, it's about a feeling that comes back over and over again.. i'll have to more interesting breaks and some more diversity!
PLURAL! 
"Fantasy is a part of reality"
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