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Sir tweak alot
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Flubber
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Posted : Jun 4, 2013 22:59:14
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 11, 2013 20:24
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Hey man.
Already in the beginning i feel the "flubber"  .
At 0.52 it sound like a new tune is starting, and a few seconds after that, at 0.55 it sound like another tune is starting.
That is kind of confusing.
Do you change the key of the base?.
You should really work on those transitions.
K n B could be improved too to give more drive and power.
1.22 is cool, perhaps you could eq the high pitched sound abit on the high end spectra.
2.39 it sounds like the stab is in different key but im not totally sure.
Arrangement is quite messy now, you could build more on each part. Now its you go very quickly from one thing to another, and it gets a bit hard to follow the red thread because of that.
3.17 is cool. Some ping pong delay would be awesome on that sound in the front.
Try to develop each part a bit more, don´t be so hasty  and focus more on the transitions in between the parts.
You got a cool n twisted sound but the arrangement kills it now.
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Atherian
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Posted : Jun 13, 2013 00:45
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Pretty good bro. I like the vibe 100 percent. Kick could be a little tigheter and the bass could be a little louder.. so if you maybe put a volume envelope on the kick to tighten it up and brought the bass up a couple db might work. Just work on your flow of writing tracks should be closer to 7 minutes maybe the transitions are a bit rushed. BUt still great work in progress. |
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Flubber
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Posted : Jun 15, 2013 23:35
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thank you guys for the great feedback!
yes i suck at song writing/progression/flow!
i spend most my time synthetizing and i do have all to lern yet how to make a decent track...
i´m switching from cubase to ableton and a all new world is unfolding! 
wish me luck |
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Anodd
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Posted : Jun 17, 2013 00:11
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As said above, it could benefit from a little more punchy k&b. Still, it sounds promising but your transitions happen too quickly, take your time to build your space, keep it progressive.
(I switched to ableton too few years back, it was like discovering fire )
Namaste and good luck !
http://soundcloud.com/anodd |
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