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Sidra_-_Spectral Linguistics
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sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 19, 2011 20:15:51
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 25, 2011 20:00
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I like 07:04 to 07:31 But you have to mix your track better , The sound is good but imo to dry for those days , So take each sound and color it with more effects on to bring your story be real , Grand and here (We want to belive you , So let us get in ..) Track must be more wet , You should fill it with many more sounds , Creat levels , Harmoney , Bring atmos and all whats need in .
Mix + Effects + Theres sounds need compressors to be more open (To the
sides & Up and down - Space) . We want to feel and be between/Inside ..
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Redshift
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Posted : Aug 26, 2011 08:32
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Cool track but I think it lacks an identity, a common thread throughout that characterises the track. The individual sounds are great but they dont all pull together to give the track its own identity. Maybe a recurring melodic theme or harmony is needed to pull everything together. But otherwise, good job!
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sidra
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 01:21
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Thanks for the response. Is there anything other than compressors that you suggest would be good to look into to give my sound more "colour" and wetness? |
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minus
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Posted : Sep 10, 2011 23:57
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some nice sounds bro,, 4 min that part is weird, i see u do use some smart, well placed bassnote changes here and there to make a nice grooove, i suggest you work it more,, and find some more interesting movements. and i dont know what the other dood says about colour and wetness,,,, but i'd definately tell u to look for 1 connector lead, which will lead the rest of the sounds,,, and for wetness,,, i always suggest,,, to "wet" some of your percussions,,, by using some flanger,distortion,paning.and other fx,,, on some of your percussion ,,, and layer them on top of your other percussions,, that will give that wet feel, and also make the track flow more,, me dig
bomz
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