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Siam - Transparent feelings Psy - Goa Trance
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siam
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 23, 2011 14:31:08
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 25, 2011 11:07
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Off topic :
You know there was an israeli band at the 80's cald Siam i realy liket .
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Far away from my style but ill write on the sound side , First .. (And i dont want you to be in illusion) - This is not an 'Strong basslines' , This is a bassline who need alot of work to be sound larg , Pro and strong , More deepness , More massive , More machines and effects because as your track sound now there nothing down there to keep us be inside or dig , Nothing , So work on that point + Mix your track better - Look at 06:25 (For example , And there more places in the track) You can hear somthing ? (No air ..) , No bass , No kik , All is dim (without any special reason) Eq ! . There 1 thing i like in your track is the atmosphere pad there in the background who came at 01:07 . More hh games and changes (For the rhythm) is necessary .
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psynaptic
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Posted : Aug 26, 2011 16:17
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hey
nice track!
it kept my interest.
didnt really like the 5-4-1 progression, but its ok. i could hear some other harmonic directions it could go besides that.
like the bass line, but dont really like the timbre of it.
overall, pretty good. i wont comment on the mix because its probably not finished yet anyway. |
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Aug 26, 2011 16:46
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ye nice track mate, but I also feel the bassline could use more deepness and power. Sometimes I get the feeling the bassline is lost in the background |
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panike
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 26, 2011 20:43
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mate i love goa trance,and your track is really nice even though i think it should have better climax in the end, and just like cardinals said your bassline needs a few tweaks 
cheers
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http://soundcloud.com/matmah |
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siam
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 28, 2011 16:31
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Hello friends and thanks for your comments and advices !!
About the bassline i was meaning that it is strong and rough for a goa track (didnt write my thoughts inthe right way so i got misunderstood ).Also i agree that needs more work and can go a lot more deep and have more power . I listened the track again carefuly and cardinals cartel is absolute right for the parts that mentioned me about how everything is lost .This a mixing problem and i ll try to fix it as best as it gets because my speakers are not optimal for producing music (No monitors and sub woofer is not working properly ) |
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cr1st0
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Aug 29, 2011 20:31
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Nice 
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