ShouldB3Banned
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Posted : Mar 14, 2014 20:38:52
We decided to change the riff on the track for release! Hope you like the new version!
Here come the drums!!
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Posted : Mar 14, 2014 21:11
Hi nice sound!
Took care of the link for you (removed the 's' in https link to http..) so the embedded player shows up - please try to do it yourself next time
Regarding the tune, it sounds good, but I'd work more on the structure and arrangement - for instance, the big buildup doesn't create enough tension, goes for a very long time without ending in large, the vocal loops itself in some parts and the last part of that build up sounds like a completely different part of the tune glued in.. as a suggestion, you could have a pulsing beat with a band pass just marking the tempo during the first minute of that section.
Then, the following beat section has it's groove and feeling, nice! But I have a huge critique that I like to lay out: people wanna dance You gave your audience about 1:40 minutes of a buildup with nothing in the back for them to dance, then this nice beat comes in for 50 seconds, and you take it away again! OK, it doesn't have to be a raging beat going of for hours like older dark (and some newer), but doe you really need another 30 second drop with a lot of tension release? It's your choice, but usually a good psy tune plays around with this tension, it's not all about release; we love harsh and nasty noises, in contrast with the beautiful
Following that though, in my latest tunes I really try to have something going on for the listener to hold on to, something marking the tempo and putting a beat down, even if it's all the way in the far back, playing with the listeners expectations and giving his mind food for thought.
After all, what do you want the people on the dance floor to be doing while you're playing your stuff?
But, I may be completely wrong and off here, and missed the point of the tune! Nevertheless, it sounds good nice and polished not much to say in the producing / mixing wise, I couldn't make better (or equal )
ShouldB3Banned
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Posted : Mar 15, 2014 12:12
Hi thanks for the feedback Yeah the length of the beat is certainly something I've taken into consideration on the new track I'm working on at the moment, much longer and more of a journey!
Also including more of a buildup in the breakdown for tension!
Good advice Thankyou Ryan
RhinoCeros
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Posted : Mar 15, 2014 18:48
Wow great sound quality ... i love it as is just wish it continued great vibe
Shine on....
ShouldB3Banned
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Posted : Mar 15, 2014 22:04
The full track is 7:21 long, however the part with the tribal drums isn't any longer than what is posted in the preview. I definitely should have made that bit longer!
RhinoCeros
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Posted : Mar 15, 2014 22:06
You gave your audience about 1:40 minutes of a buildup with nothing in the back for them to dance, then this nice beat comes in for 50 seconds, and you take it away again! OK, it doesn't have to be a raging beat going of for hours like older dark (and some newer), but doe you really need another 30 second drop with a lot of tension release? It's your choice, but usually a good psy tune plays around with this tension, it's not all about release; we love harsh and nasty noises, in contrast with the beautiful 
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