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Sharing my new track.. ENJOY!!!
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Feb 15, 2010 11:11:04
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 16, 2010 02:14
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something is wrong with your intro (0:28 - 1:21), I can't point my finger at it but something is not making sense. I would recommend you to bring thing in more rapidly rather then stretching.
The transitions are somewhat similar to one another you need more variation and power I think.
7:29 transition with the kick is not so good, you need to work on it more and make it sharper. The 7:58 transition you need more power, way more power, not just vocal sample fade in.
It also feel really really compressed to me, I would recommend to avoid using compression at all for crisper sound.
I hope this was some constructive help to you, good luck!
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Feb 16, 2010 08:21
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First of all thank you for comment..
So the "intro" doesnt makes sense according to what? I mean it shoul make sense? Its free to the artist making songs as he likes, there isn´t a way music "should be".. And with that "more power" think is also the same, like if I wanted more or less power there i´ll simply do it, remember one thing: no rules in music so it dont sound all the same, like most of the more recent music. The only thing you´re maybe right is about compression but this track isn´t fully mastered, I just uploaded when I finished and its at -6dB so it should and will sound better in the final master. Thank you anyway 
P.D. Im not attemping to do Psy-Trance, I´m kindda inventing something 
Good Vibes!
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