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Serious Psychedelic Trance
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Bipolar
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Feb 3, 2015 09:45:43
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Feb 3, 2015 19:25
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Bipolar
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Feb 4, 2015 23:53
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Thanks bro!!!  Im from mexico city |
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knocz
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Posted : Mar 2, 2015 13:02
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Go Mexico! Arriba! (sorry for the Speedy Gonzales quote.. it was uncalled for. I shall restrain myself next time)
This is great Perhaps the bass is just a tad bit low in the mix, with your mid-highs being a bit overwhelming.
Nevertheless I can hear a ton of work in this tune, it comes together great and seems controlled.
Improvements (in my opinion) would be more on the rhythm section (always the rhythms..). In your big build up, the drums arent "having fun", and when it all comes back it just goes to the same rhythm I like to thing there was a real live drummer playing to the tune, and think what he would do (playing the same sequence over and over isn't fun ) - and maybe this is where I have the biggest faults as well.
But that doesn't affect the actual track quality, (again) lots of great stuff here, some unusual  breaks and a good sense of sound synthesis
Perhaps, another tip would be to get a bit angry - building up a bit of tension with some more aggressive sounds / rhythms during the build up, and letting all the stress be released after that, I think tohse dynamics is what makes a tune to be epic
It sounds goo dkeep it up man! 
 Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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