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panike
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Posted : Sep 30, 2011 19:11:17
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 1, 2011 02:57
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that snare while very cool is a bit over the top, sounds a tad out of the mix. in general sound is ok no big problems, but the drums, the beat, very loopy. generic with the vanguard type lead.
i commented this on another tune here just now - dare more!!! it seems you know how to make music, just go more outside the box, work those drums especially.
and delete disco dsp and vanguard  make next 5 tracks without them just to free your mind 
 
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panike
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Posted : Oct 1, 2011 03:36
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wow.... nice to hear that i did an vanguard lead with sylenth1  ....only sylenth1 here mate
but thanks and youre right my drums need more work.
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 1, 2011 03:44
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Icetoon
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 01:40
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Dude, first of all : If you're gonna use overused rise samples (such as the NB one you used) at least try changing it slightly. Same goes for the lead.
And then yeah, that snare which Faxinadu mentioned is definitely out of the mix. And please for god sakes don't use percussion loops...
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WhySoLazy?
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 02:44
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What I liked is the base line and the drums , just need more tuning with the levels imo .
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panike
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 23:39
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On 2011-10-02 01:40, Icetoon wrote:
Dude, first of all : If you're gonna use overused rise samples (such as the NB one you used) at least try changing it slightly. Same goes for the lead.
And then yeah, that snare which Faxinadu mentioned is definitely out of the mix. And please for god sakes don't use percussion loops...
Nice work and good luck
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still working on my rises. so yes i'm using some samples. but what is wrong with the leads?
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psyraal
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 00:50
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 20:59
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really dig the lead cming at 1.54.. cool dark goa-ish.. cheers
re-arrange what you thought was real |
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