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Self Aware Robot

Terrafractyl
Terrafractyl

Started Topics : 12
Posts : 85
Posted : Nov 3, 2005 05:33

Greetings,

Here is a pretty new track of mine that i really enjoyed writing, but the more I listen to it, the more problems I have with it...

http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3HFZJOQJQDHBG2U2S4ZHE3AWQ2

I think it is a little busy in parts and still needs a little tweaking, but it's almost there.

Here's something a bit different too

http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=187OKHJWWAO7W2RAQAAYD6F3MY

I've been working with a percussionist trying to do some ambient psy grooves hope you like it.
comments/criticisms please!

Bizzarro
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 25
Posts : 288
Posted : Nov 3, 2005 08:26

nice production
killer work on the tracks lotsa melodies in them
they both are nice but one of themis rather minimalistic towards the midway point
GOOD work though lotsa calm psychedelic sounds
keep it up
boom boom from bombay

Methodic Marble
IsraTrance Full Member

Started Topics : 54
Posts : 384
Posted : Nov 3, 2005 14:21

well last track i heard from you i remember that i enjoy it, but sometimes it was a little bit empty.in this track it happens the same thing, very good melodies and nice rythms but your problem is that : you don´t make many variation´s like going in crescendo...you music is very static ......do i make my self clear?
altough is a "nice" but you could do better if you take more risks, and do more variations ......
and hithat´s

PEACE n

Terrafractyl
Terrafractyl

Started Topics : 12
Posts : 85
Posted : Nov 3, 2005 14:53

thanks guys

thanks again methodic marble, i'll try an mix it up a bit more...

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