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spiky
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 14:53
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 15:21
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work more on this one spiky!
first of all check some melodies whick are out of rythm!and their delays also!
then try make these melodies sound better cause they are out of scale-no harmony at all on it!
unless u do this on purpose,change it!
your bass sounds good but at times overlaps the kick!
dont get me wrong but thats the truth! 
work work work!
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spiky
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 15:54
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thanks dud! more critics please - no other way to get better 
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