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Second fullon track from upcoming demo album..
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 15:15:15
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Syncronik
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 20:17
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i'll write as I listen...
really nice intro.... short but effective!
powerfull kick-bass, but the intro delays suddently cuts and sounds like something is missing
nice games at 1:20, nice panning synths, good job!
good one at 2:12, but maybe there is a little abuse on that synth
3:04 nice break!
4:00 the downbeat enters in the right time... nice..
5:32 that melody could sound better, same at 5:59
maybe an arp or somenthing
nice track bro..
i think the only think that you need to work on, is in the instrument job for some sounds, and in some of the arrange of the midi arps, leads etc...
keep it up!
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 23:05
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ou.. tnx bro and i'm happy you liked the track..!!
really good and objective feedback..  )
yeah, the 2:12 part bro, u belive me, i made this track about 5 days, i wrote the melody for that part 5 times, in the end i was ironically laughing and leaving that part..  ) and yeah, maybe the synth starts to annoying, i will change this.. on the final check for my demo album i will change things from the experience and feedbacks from isra-forum for sure.. )
Cheers Isra-Soldier..!! |
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 02:14
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this one gonna be forgotten..!! 3:DD
any more comments?! |
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robertpull
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Posted : Oct 11, 2010 10:13
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I think the first 2 minutes of the song are very nice and original, but the part from about 2:12 to 3:00 looses me. The synth part has to be improved there.
Keep working on this one, and I believe you can have a good track for your demo !! |
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snowdogg
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Posted : Oct 11, 2010 18:58
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nice! who noticed the hellraiser sample ;0 |
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 11, 2010 22:06
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tnx robertpull and snowdogg for the improving comments... i must thank that sample and clear sound i make now for my good friend Vladimir Ljubichic aka Inverted Logic... when he wasn't be with me the last few months, i wouldn't make that great sounds.. he's waiting for the perfect moment 2 relase some killa tracks, i will make this tracks sounding better of course, to make u all guys enjoing the Track... )
Cheers Isra-Soldiers.....!! ps. In future all u psy brothas can know me as "Magnetic Mind".. ) |
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Oct 12, 2010 11:00
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i have always looked out for ur tunes and will continue to do so.... u have a unique style and the quality of ur production is top notch.... keep up the gr8 work Mr Magnetic Mind.
good luck for the future....
Ps: would like to hear u produce some dark tunes now... too much full on bro 
cheers! |
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knocz
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Posted : Oct 12, 2010 14:58
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Hi!
In that section from 2:12 to 3:00, try playing with octaves, either doubling or just shifting the notes one or two octaves higher..
I think you got lost after that section, and the track until the final break is a little lost, trying to find itself. After a break it seems there's a lead missing there..
 Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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