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Scenix - Impossible emotions[135 bpm]

Scenix
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Posted : Jun 27, 2010 19:42:51
Im kinda stuck here so i Need some advice on my new track. All criticism are welcome. just tell me what u think so i can do it better!. And if u hear something i shulld change tell me the time where it is! Thank you!



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pr0fane
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Posted : Jun 28, 2010 13:42
I think you should kill that high pad-like sound in some sections of the track. It does sound fairly ok at times, but it's used continuously up til 3:30 (and also way too much in the rest of the track) and I found it too much even after just 2 minutes.

Use it sparingly instead of during almost the entire track; I think the track works best when it's stripped down to just the basics - the pads and melodies takes way too much attention from the other elements.           DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
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Scenix
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Posted : Jun 28, 2010 21:56
Quote:

On 2010-06-28 13:42, pr0fane wrote:
I think you should kill that high pad-like sound in some sections of the track. It does sound fairly ok at times, but it's used continuously up til 3:30 (and also way too much in the rest of the track) and I found it too much even after just 2 minutes.

Use it sparingly instead of during almost the entire track; I think the track works best when it's stripped down to just the basics - the pads and melodies takes way too much attention from the other elements.




Yeah i heard that the pad is higher then it shulld be. i will fix this as soon i get back home.. and add some new stuff to the sound. this is not the useully way i mastering a song. but it turned out better then i did before. just need som small fix's with the eq's. Thank you for the comment!.           https://soundcloud.com/sagepsy
Scenix
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Posted : Jun 28, 2010 22:00
Some moore criticism would be awesome!           https://soundcloud.com/sagepsy
orange
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Posted : Jul 6, 2010 20:14
first of all there is something wrong with the notes used... they dont fit.

u have a nice punch on the kick and bass but the rest of the track is way to messy.

the pad is very boring after a couple of minutes.
the lead synth is cheap.

and you have to tune your synths better the track is allover the place note wise!

if you dont know notes try at least to build everything around the bassline note.

and the breakdown with just the kick/bass/percussion should be earlier in the track.

and loose that cheap lead synth melody.

keep working

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