klippel
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Posted : Mar 5, 2012 13:10:25
a track i started last year and that evolved with time to what it is now. i have no time to work further on it right now and for some time to come as i am more than busy and happy with my nuborn daughter
obviously with the lil cuty in mind you can expect something for girls ;-)
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Posted : Mar 5, 2012 14:32
The starting bassline reminds me the old Logic Bomb of 2002, which I adore!
I wonder where is the vocal that plays in 3:20 is from? (I have an old horrible track with it).
Its a different track than most of what I heard from you. I think the last part after the break needs more melodies and changes, it is kinda empty - from 4:00 to the end.
Congrats for your daughter! Start making diper changing shifts
Misha
klippel
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Posted : Mar 7, 2012 10:43
hey mish ka, cheers for the feedback.
you´re right its somewhat empty so far in the later parts.. will work on that for sure.
do you reckon i should stay with the first baseline throughout the track? dunno if the progression makes it better or not..
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
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Posted : Mar 7, 2012 14:14
The second bassline is more energetic. It adds a good change in the track, works for me
From second hearing I think you should make it fatter with some more punch, but thats my opinion.
Cheers,
Misha
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 05:22
nice!.. love those crunchy sounds after the intro pad...
cool sounds and groove.. but some parts are too sweet for my taste.. but kool flow anyways +1 for mish kah's comment.. good stuff! re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 21:46
Nice synth and lead work.
It is a pity for the kick+bass combo and for the mudded sound, because this song rocks.
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 22:57
nice track. and good luck with the nuborn, my girlfriend is about to go into labor any moment, i actuly think its going to happen tonight
klippel
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Posted : Mar 9, 2012 07:59
cheers for the input guys
@ierofante: true that about the mudded sound.. will look into that and make it clearer.
about the kick/bass: the baseline does sound weak and thin and i will change that, but i really like the kick as is.. but i am aware that for a lot of people its not what they are used to (or would like to hear) in trance.
@comet: if you think psychedelics are mind expanding just wait for your lil one to come seriously, all the best for your wife and kid http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 9, 2012 13:22
thanks klippel, iv just got back from the hosp now after a she was rushed in lastnight, no sign of the baby yet but any moment soon. im so tierd i feel like iv been at a tribe of frog party
klippel
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Posted : Mar 9, 2012 13:56
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On 2012-03-09 13:22, COMET SHELL wrote:
thanks klippel, iv just got back from the hosp now after a she was rushed in lastnight, no sign of the baby yet but any moment soon. im so tierd i feel like iv been at a tribe of frog party
you think you are tired now? just wait until the lil one is there but honestly, i hope for you waiting will be short cause it does suck badly!
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 9, 2012 14:00
thank you, i cant wait ha ha
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Posted : Mar 15, 2012 19:14
Congratz to you for nuborn daughter...
And just 1 thing to say... What a fine proggy! Long time I didnt hear some cool spiritual vibes like that...
so floating synth melody...
only one comment: Try you use deeper bass? I know, that should be morning track, but just little bit more of resonance on bass guarantee more taste to dance and smile imho.
peace
klippel
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Posted : Mar 15, 2012 21:18
cheers mate,
as i said above i will look into the bass. its a bit thin and nasal as is now, i will try to make it more fat and bouncy http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
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Posted : Mar 17, 2012 04:44
kick/bass is bad.
has no energy or punch to it..
drums also not the best..
too much repetition overall.
the track contains lots of nice ideas but lucks execution.
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Posted : Mar 19, 2012 18:05
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On 2012-03-15 21:18, klippel wrote:
cheers mate,
as i said above i will look into the bass. its a bit thin and nasal as is now, i will try to make it more fat and bouncy
