psyviz
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Posted : Jan 26, 2012 20:26:59
This is my latest song i hope everyone enjoys it, comments and critics are welcome
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Jan 28, 2012 14:26
Swear i could hear the rhino ..
Some realy nice ideas in , Just try work hard on your down area sound , Bring them be more deep , Let them lead the track , Try make your music more wet (Less dry) , More effects .
Keep going .. Cheers ! .
psyviz
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Posted : Jan 28, 2012 23:23
THANK Cardinals I will work harder, i am going to try make a song that ephisises every part of my next song... I think when you say Let them lead the track you mean let the leads folly the basline better Is that what you mean????
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 29, 2012 00:41
Commenting as I listen:
bizarre intro, i like it. kick and bass need better eq/comp, add more bottom end too. sounds are nice but i agree with cardinals, you can make them more wet. nice creativity going on with your play of sounds . cool leads. keep it up
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psyviz
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Posted : Jan 29, 2012 02:25
Thanks for your time ProtoDrive when you mean "wet" are you refering to making the sounds more clear like wet in as an attraction for feelling?? ... If you could give me a discripotion of wet i would be greatfull
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jan 29, 2012 03:14
"wet" is used to describe the amount of effects (delay, reeverb, etc) added to a sound, the more quantity of this applied, the more wet a track is. you can even see theres usually a knob on those effects called wet/dry.
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psyviz
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Posted : Jan 30, 2012 01:30
Gotch Protodrive i will add some delays You got some greast sound Man
Art Of Existence
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Posted : Jan 30, 2012 21:38
wow.. this track could rule if you crank the volume and dynamics up! right now it soudns like you´ve put a low pass filter on it and forgot it was on.
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Posted : Jan 31, 2012 06:52
cool tune, but fuck dem rhinos tho cuz, a nigga gotta eat.. u kno what im sayin? it aint easy being black in a society like ours here in africa with all dem white ass crackers comin wavin their moneys like its grown pubes they just cut off.. all im sayin nigga is fuck em rhino ass bitches, u gotta do what u gotta do to get dat dough. we be riskin our lives for dem rhino trophies nigga, police chasin us all day long busting up wit guns n shit.. they think it sum kind of war or sumthin, they be layin in the bushes just waitin for dat right moment man, as soon as they see us bam bam bam, and im not talking small ass pussy ass guns here tho nigga, they packin ak47s and alll dat shit u wouldnt imagine.. alll that just for some cash to survive man.. fuck them bitch ass rinos and fuck the police
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 16:49
Art Of Existence Thanks man usually when i work on a track i somtimes end up over prossecing every thing i also get looptitis hehe due to work flow. I heard my song again and you are spot on there is a bit of work to be done what i learn from you guys is great
greyball its not a colour thing its the devil we should all be able to get along, and why not save 10 rhinos today and let them mate and in ten years , double the profit maybe share the land.... Its Democracy and and i dont like it but we should all be able to enjoy what life has to offer peace and love
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 20:39
dude is that a rhino sample at the beginning? that shit is awesome!
yes, you have some great stuff going on, but all your low end sounds really subdued, do you have so strange multiband comp on the master or something? what are you listening on?
if you fix the kick and bass filtering you will have killar track! Try listening to your track together with some pro track you love, then toggle back and forth between the two, this should give you an idea of what to listen for in the low end.
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psyviz
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 23:58
Equilizyme Thanks that rhino sample is a sample from a free plugin from http://www.hgf-synthesizer.de/ its one of the HG Fortune Classics free under downloads I use a small 25w hi-fi i baught 8 years ago I find it really hard to get a good kick and bass but i have come up with a new way of working so lets see i got 2 new speaker yesterday but the amp does not give much so i am trying with a eq on another amp just for the new but old speakers in other words i am going to try them as subs lets see going to give them a try now
psyviz
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 00:04
Equilizyme what kind of state of mind were you in when you made intro to "Iterative Process" You got a great track briliant man how do you make your stories??? whats the thought or conduct behind it all... I try meditate or focus but workflow alway skrews things up
Equilizyme
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 01:24
Ha, thanks man im glad you like it! ummm usually the best ideas come when I just put the instrument in the arrangement and then use the MIDI keyboard and play around with sounds/melodies til I find how that instrument can fit into the mix. I dont have a MIDI keyboard, but my computer keyboard can become one when using ableton, not sure if that works for other DAW...
as far as the overall tune, i just compose as many different things as i can think of, like as many different passages as i can make, exhausting all ideas, all influences, until i get sick of it. then i condense all the ideas and passages into a smaller number of ideas/passages that are of higher quality. then i see if those new passages need things added to them. if not, i do another round of condensing, which usually results in like 3 or 4 cool passages with some good ideas. then line em up, link em up and you have a track hopefully.
also listening to your in-progress works away from the computer can really help identify what is missing from a track.
