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Posted : Feb 22, 2011 06:51:29
Hi again! This is my second post here on isratrance! Thanks for the respond last time it really helped! Haven't worked anymore on the dark track but I made this and have been working on it a lot. I think it sounds pretty good, what do you think?
I want to know how I can make this better, if I can? So just tell me! <3
Luz
psypersia
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Posted : Feb 22, 2011 10:31
its a nice track but it still needs some work
there is too much low ends on the bass and kick
maybe you can layer the bass ...
but if you like it this way then keep it this way.
the pitched vocal is cool really liked it also add some more musical elements keep up
pr0fane
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Posted : Feb 22, 2011 11:20
Agree with psypersia about the low end part - almost sounds like the master channel has been put through a LP-filter
Bassline groove is ok, but the sound could be a bit better. Some more spank in the mids maybe. I also think the track is begging for a bit more percussion, although this kind of dubby techno isn't usually rich on percussion.
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Psykeltur
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Posted : Feb 22, 2011 11:45
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On 2011-02-22 10:31, psypersia wrote:
its a nice track but it still needs some work
there is too much low ends on the bass and kick
maybe you can layer the bass ...
but if you like it this way then keep it this way.
the pitched vocal is cool really liked it also add some more musical elements keep up
Thanks for the feedback!
What do you mean by layering the bass?
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On 2011-02-22 11:20, pr0fane wrote:
Agree with psypersia about the low end part - almost sounds like the master channel has been put through a LP-filter
Bassline groove is ok, but the sound could be a bit better. Some more spank in the mids maybe. I also think the track is begging for a bit more percussion, although this kind of dubby techno isn't usually rich on percussion.
So expect layering how can I adjust the low end? I also noticed this so I put EQ on it and lowered the Low End, but maybe there is other trick to this?
Hm, there is a HP filter that is on zero on the track, I use it to create the flowy effects on the "break" parts of the track, you think this can have anything with the sound to do? Maybe I should animate it so that it's off during the time it's not used - I though having it on zero was == off, but maybe I can be wrong?
But also, I am trying to make this sound a little bit like under the water, whales and stuff!
Anyway, thanks a lot for the feedback! I'm working right now on percs, but nothing too complex as I think simple percs fits better for the track and style!
<3
Psykeltur
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Posted : Feb 23, 2011 18:04
Ok guys! New version, what do you think?
Psykeltur
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Posted : Feb 23, 2011 18:06
Yeah, sorry about the last part in the track, was not supposed to be there of course! Don't understad what happened there! If it fucks you entire experiance of the track lemme know and i upload new
Plasmorh
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Posted : Feb 23, 2011 21:56
i think u lack body in ur sound..
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
daark
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Posted : Feb 24, 2011 09:57
bring out the snare it is lowpassed too much and bring more highs to the track it has much too much space in the high area so either add hihats or open all your sounds.
http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers Wierd shit happens :)
So just tell me! <3
