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Posted : Dec 28, 2010 19:02
Not going to comment on the music side of things as I am not into this style, but the bottom end sounds incoherent. The kick and bassline sounds don't flow well, its like there is a flow stop at very kick drop. Try findind a kick (or tuning the existing one if you've created it) so that it matches the bassline, better...which lacks some punch, it sounds lifeless.
The kick and bass combo sounds weak compared to the rest of the stuff, so once you sort the individual sounds out, either mix them in a bit louder, or pull some of the extremely loud effects loop/lead sequences, down...they jump out of the speakers in an uncontrolable way..
...ok, there's a completely different vibe at 2minutes...
The different parts of the arrangement with the different bassline patterns sound very incoherent, its like at points there some bottom end drive and then after a bit, it just goes into something that strips all the drive away, kinda thinking why would you do that to a tune? especially if its for the dancefloor? and there are a lot of elements to the tune that need quite a bit of sorting out, cause it sounds quite messy at times.
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Dec 28, 2010 23:19
* Disco Hoolligans .. Thx for taking the time and listen .
Bass and kik go's the same 65% of the track and only the note is change there only one place in that kik its change at 01:54 - 03:45 But there the bass is deferent too . To tell you the true .. (But this is my opinion) All sit well but yet there mix work to do for sure this is only an 20% of the all work we know that .
*Daark , What you mean 128kbps samples ? I made those Mello/Atmos on 24 b this afternoon and compress them x2 . Here track is on 320kbps + Soundcloud sound S _ _ T ! .
*Thanks alot SilmarJr and Epimetheus for the good words
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 05:22
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On 2010-12-28 21:06, daark wrote:
you actualy are getting this from a 128kbps sample so don't be so sure
I know daark, I wasn't born yesterday. I have heard a lot of music on soundcloud, including my own to know what soundcloud's audio quality, does to a mix.
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On 2010-12-28 23:19, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
...All sit well but yet there mix work to do for sure this is only an 20% of the all work we know that ...
I hear ya, I have too posted demos of tunes in the works that I was overly excited about, then continued mixing the tracks and when I went back to the early demo clips I posted, to realise they were a proper mess.
I am confident it will sound much better once you guys sort out the mix.
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 19:00
Satori Vs Daark Vs Upavas Vs Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 19:12
Hey !!
The pros at work I see we can expect something good, right now it feels like there's some good ideas, but you need to work on the flow of the track like DH said,
as for production i'm not talking about it cos surely i don't know as much as u guys.
Cheers!
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I see we can expect something good, right now it feels like there's some good ideas, but you need to work on the flow of the track like DH said,