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Satori - On the edge of a dream
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sAt0ri
Satori
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Posted : Jun 13, 2009 05:25:13
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Here is my newest track, only just started writing stuff for the daytime and would love some feedback and criticism.
Satori - On the edge of a dream
http://www.reverbnation.com/darkpsy
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sAt0ri
Satori
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Posted : Jun 16, 2009 13:08
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Anyone listen to it? Would love some words on the production.....good or bad. |
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Pinkadelic @ ciledakniP
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 17, 2009 04:58
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Hey i just listened to. i hope you can take constructive criticism.. if you don´t please just ignore this comment. everything here is my opinion too, so i can be extremely wrong!!! i am a
producer too, and i produce house and in a whole different manner
i think the entrance is too cliche´d, just my opinion, other then that, it´s well produced.
the kick enters too suddently with no presentation, and the little melody is too out of sync with
the song.
the bass is well done, i liked it. the kick is too. i´d want to experiment with some crazier beats though, instead of just a snare.
spanish guitar lead is well done, fits nice with the ambiental pad and rhythm.
little synth melody that breaks it down is also well done, i liked the filter introduction.
i liked the panning synth. nice touch.
only thing i didnt like is that same melody from the beginning.. just a matter of taste though.
the song is well produced, nice ambiance feel, good use of reverbs, (listening in headphones though, could be wrong) and very few elements to the song. (coming from someone who produces tech house and minimal...  )
and that´s it, at the breakdown i stopped listening because my time ran out at the internet cafe.
hope you can use this to improve your productions.. and good luck!!!
Pink
 -Soultech/Stampgevaar Records, Parampara Recs
-MSN: marcio_zimerman9@hotmail.com
-myspace: http://www.myspace.com/pinkadelica |
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d.n.i Ultravision Recs
d.N.i / Endless Euforia
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Posted : Jun 17, 2009 05:44
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well, now my opinion about a track, i im hearing now just one so, let see..
on the edge of dream... well, the melodies that u used was out of sync with the bassline and bpm of track and also the notes used on bassline sounds is very strange... maybe if u use it more linear, u can play more with mellodies... on other way, its well equalized, but really u need to check about, when u use samplers, stretch then to the bpm of track.
welll keep up the work and good luck!
cheers
Adolfo
DNI ALBUM OUT NOW!
http://www.beatspace.com/dettagli/dettaglio.asp?id=5822
http://www.psyshop.com/shop/CDs/ulv/ulv1cd005.html
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sAt0ri
Satori
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Posted : Jun 17, 2009 10:43
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Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated! It helps so much to get opinions like this as I have heard the track so many times and my ears are bias.
I played most of the melodies live then quantized, no samplers, so I had a hard time getting the timing down.
These tips will help going into the studio next, thanks!
Peace
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